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By Ardath Rekha
Synopsis: Writing Challenge from Ally Ranger: Write a sex scene using 100 words or less… 20 words of dialogue maximum… no names may be used. So all I’m going to tell you is that these are two canon characters from Pitch Black. The rest is a mystery you must solve. Thanks to Chicky for clueing me in on this… this was COOL!
Category: Fan Fiction
Fandom: Pitch Black (2000)
Series: None
Challenges: Ally Ranger’s “Almost-Silent Sex Scene” challenge
Rating: M
Orientation: Het (Plot)
Pairing: Mystery Pairing
Warning: Sexual Situations
Number of Chapters: 1
Net Word Count:For individual anthology stories that appear in the Read Online section, net word counts include only the story text on the actual story page, minus the title. 93
Total Word Count:For individual anthology stories that appear in the Read Online section, total word counts include all text present within the story tabs, excluding tab text, forward/back page links, and tooltips. This count tends to be slightly different from the eBook Total Word Count reported in aggregate on the anthology title page. 391
Story Length: Flash Fiction
The characters and events of Pitch Black are © 2000 USA Films, Gramercy Pictures, and Interscope Communications; Directed by David Twohy; Screenplay by Ken and Jim Wheat and David Twohy; Story by Ken and Jim Wheat; Produced by Tom Engelman. This work of fan fiction is a transformative work for entertainment purposes only, with no claims on, nor intent to infringe upon, the rights of the parties listed above. All additional characters and situations are the creation of, and remain the property of, Ardath Rekha. eBook design and cover art by LaraRebooted, using graphics provided by PngWing, the Windsong font from Font Meme, and background graphics © 1998 Noel Mollon, adapted and licensed via Teri Williams Carnright from the now-retired Fantasyland Graphics site (c. 2003). This eBook may not be sold or advertised for sale. If you are a copyright holder of any of the referenced works, and believe that part or all of this eBook exceeds fair use practices under the Digital Millennium Copyright Act, please contact Ardath Rekha.
Rev. 2022.10.09
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Writhing, fighting. Pressed together in the shadows. Unbelievable, incredible feelings spiking through her. Not him but the feelings are almost like it is. Almost close enough.
He rocks into her viciously, sending torrents of pleasure through her system. She doesn’t know if she can survive. They shudder together, their releases striking in unison.
Pulling back, he gazes at her with thoughtful eyes. A lump hardens her throat. It almost felt like him, but those
“Thanks for the breather,” he says, his voice awkward, as he draws back and moves away.